This is a great story. Great premise. Great writing. Clearly a labor of love. I just downloaded it and I'm already hooked. But the art...
It looks great for what it is, but the AI generated art takes me right out of the fiction. Dead eyes. Eyes that are closed when they should be open, or not focused where they should. It's more than distracting, it's unsettling. There is some serious uncanny valley going on. I can't even look at the art, I'm just reading the story. It's not your fault, it's the limitations of the technology.
You've crafted a world that deserves better. Don't settle for creepy AI ghouls. I say this in all sincerity. This has the potential to be a spectacular AVN, but to get there you need an artist.
Please don't give up! I look forward to following this story!
Thanks for the comment and kind words, and I'm glad you like the story so far!
My preference would certainly be for human made art over AI art if possible, but right now, just starting out, I don't have anything close to the funds required, and I'm not a visual artist myself. If in future the opportunity presented itself then I would take it - at the very least as AI capabilities develop further and I learn more I absolutely will refine older images as I go. You are right - this is a labour of love - and at the moment this is the only way for me to make what I am making. But I am always seeking to get better!
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Hello there,
Looks very interesting indeed.
Quick question though, concerning the erotic part of this story, is there a list of kinks somewhere?
What should we expect for the content in these sex scenes?
Thanks,
This is a great story. Great premise. Great writing. Clearly a labor of love. I just downloaded it and I'm already hooked. But the art...
It looks great for what it is, but the AI generated art takes me right out of the fiction. Dead eyes. Eyes that are closed when they should be open, or not focused where they should. It's more than distracting, it's unsettling. There is some serious uncanny valley going on. I can't even look at the art, I'm just reading the story. It's not your fault, it's the limitations of the technology.
You've crafted a world that deserves better. Don't settle for creepy AI ghouls. I say this in all sincerity. This has the potential to be a spectacular AVN, but to get there you need an artist.
Please don't give up! I look forward to following this story!
Thanks for the comment and kind words, and I'm glad you like the story so far!
My preference would certainly be for human made art over AI art if possible, but right now, just starting out, I don't have anything close to the funds required, and I'm not a visual artist myself. If in future the opportunity presented itself then I would take it - at the very least as AI capabilities develop further and I learn more I absolutely will refine older images as I go. You are right - this is a labour of love - and at the moment this is the only way for me to make what I am making. But I am always seeking to get better!