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For Android, it's only possible with Joiplay (if you're still looking for how).

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                                   Y O D A

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I'm not sure, the last thing I heard about her was someone mentioning that she had a baby or something on the coments of one of her games (although I don't know if it's true), in Discord, the last thing she said regarding updates to her games was about Mettaton's route in IF Underfell around March of this year, and on Tumblr, the most recent thing I found was about Gaster from IF Dancetale in May. Beyond that, I haven't heard anything else, although there's still hope that she'll come back (considering that it hasn't even been a year since the last thing she said), and If the baby thing is true, that might be the reason for her inactivity. Whatever the case may be, all we can do is wait for her to give us more news, whether it's about her games or her situation in general. 


This isn't related to Darkpetal (or not entirely), but after seeing some of your other comments, I'll tell you that most IF/text-based games are made in engines like Twine and another one (somewhat strange in my opinion) It's Choice of Games, although I'm not sure if that's the name of the engine, but that's what the page is called. 

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First of all, I hope you get over your burnout. Your games have potential and I don't want you to end up like Darkpetal (I know the reason why he stopped updating). Second, for the Spanish translation, I would recommend you look for another way to translate it or (if possible) get someone to help you with it, as someone whose primary language is Spanish, I find some things "questionable" about the translations provided by Google, mainly because they are very literal, so to speak. An example is with the phrase ""I felt a chill run down my spine" in the translation it is as "senti un escalofrío recorrer mi columna vertebral" when it should be "sentí un escalofrío recorrer mi espalda". Anyway, it's good enough; it's a bit strange to read for a Spanish speaker, but it works.

Although it's somewhat ironic that I say this, given that I'm using a translator to write this myself, which is why I wouldn't offer (if you wanted) to help with the translation It's because although my English is good enough to understand 90-95% of it, excluding words/expressions I don't know, my translation skills are awful.

Okay, I think I went on a bit too long with my comment, but I already wrote it and if I didn't publish it it would be a waste of time, so... Whatever.

Okay, now that I have a little more time and I've read my comment and your response (I had written it in a bit of a hurry) I just wanted to add that as such it is not his personality that is the problem I actually like it, it's that between the context and, well, his personality, his age feels a little odd, that's all.

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First of all, I'm glad to see you were finally able to update, and although I saw the update from the moment it came out, between itch not wanting to load and other things I only just started reading today, I wanted to give a little suggestion or opinion, however you want to see it and it is with Jax's age, and I don't know if it's just me but I feel that his personality (or the way he acts) is not very in accordance with his age, and it's that since I read this for the first time and even now whenever I read any interaction with Jax I feel like I'm talking to someone in their late 20s (maybe around 27-30) rather than someone old enough to be my father. I don't know, I just feel like something doesn't fit or maybe it's just me, so yes maybe I would modify his age a little, if you don't want that's fine, I can always have my headcanon.


P.S. Just to clarify, if there are any spelling mistakes in all of the above it is the translator's fault, although I can understand English almost perfectly, I still have difficulty translating from Spanish to English so there's that

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Okay, I can't take this anymore, I have to say it somewhere, so if you don't want spoilers (in case you haven't already) don't read this, I'm just letting off steam.

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For starters, WHAT THE FUCK, why did you have to make E stay alive in episode 3, it would have been better if he stayed dead, at least it wouldn't hurt as much and not to mention everything that involves Juliet afterwards, I hope that when chapter 4 comes out onwards they give her a minimally understandable reason as to why she is so overprotective of E, even if that doesn't excuse all the manipulation and how she controls her family, I'm not looking for her to really redeem herself or anything but just a reason to not hate her so much, It's just because I simply don't like reaching that level of hatred, how much is it?, well he earned the "privilege" of being the third addition to my list of (I need to change the name) characters that I wish death or worse on, and I don't know if it's just because of how well the creator of the story writes or if I simply touch on one of the few topics that bring out the worst in me. Anyway, once the story finally continues I only hope for two things: either they give Juliet that reason to at least "excuse" her overprotective behavior or that she suffers as much as possible.


P.S. Just in case anyone asks (or reads this in general) the other 2 characters on that list are Beth Carver from Trials in Tainted Space and Eliza Queen from BDCC, if you know maybe you understand me a little, if not, I'll leave it to you that one is a slaver with extra steps and a bitch and the other is a doctor/chemist and in both cases neither shows any kind of remorse and/or enjoy what they do, barely showing any appreciation for the lives of others other than their own. (Eliza is forgiven only a little, though in her case it's a bit more personal.)


Okay, last thing, I just want to clarify that if you notice any grammatical errors or anything like that, it's the translator's fault, since English is not my main language and I'm nowhere near mastering it, at least on the pronunciation and writing side, since I can understand it almost perfectly with the exception of words that I don't know how to translate. 

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What's the problem?(send a screenshot if you can)

Hehe, yes, thanks, but now that I have some of your attention, I wanted to ask you a slightly weird question, and you don't have to answer if you don't want to, but...

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Okay, I just had to start a new game because the previous ones were deleted and I don't even remember why (and I don't know if they would still work)., I just got to chapter 7A and I was wondering, when Az'Lean tells you that only he will decide when and how to use your abilities and that he will use you to your fullest, did he only talk about helping the kingdom or did he also talk about other things...

I'm sorry if the question makes you uncomfortable, as I said it's VERY weird, but I didn't want to be left wondering if it's just that or if it's really just my submissive side getting carried away by a character with such a dominant aura (plus something about how he acts when he says it makes it feel even more like that)

PS: I don't know if there's something wrong with how I wrote it, since my English is still pretty bad (at least in terms of writing and pronunciation) and the translator often messes up what I say.

(I'm already regretting writing this)

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The update came at the best possible time, I just came from being left with a mixture of anger and frustration for some things I read in another story and being left with the cliffhanger at the end from its 3rd chapter just to find that the story is being rewritten, seeing that this was updated just brightened my day again.

(In case anyone is curious, that other story is "Love After Dead" you can see it and other cool stuff on my collection of if's on my profile)

I've been reading this for a couple of days and I've only just reached chapter 3 and to avoid giving away any major spoilers I'll just say, Juliet, I hope you burn in hell bitch.

Well, I just remembered/re-found (haven't played since 0.1.6) that this might be intentional or something like that, since unless rahi has confirmed it as a bug then this was intentional 

(this is from the developer comments on that same quest line)

I think I found a bug or something (I don't suppose this should happen), and I managed to remove the permanent chastity cage using estroGplus (feminizing pill), as I say I don't know if this was intentional or just something that was overlooked when that content was added, I leave a screenshot as proof

Thank god I've seen too many stories and good concepts stagnating or being abandoned on this page (darkpetal why💔), so knowing that you are still working on this is a relief, I hope you can finish it soon 

I would say that the best way to use POVs is to show those of the characters present with the MC and outside of those situations (and the interludes obviously) only on occasions like Lexia's POVs in The first and second chapters and Havard's at the beginning of the third, honestly the POVs seem like a good resource to me but somewhat complicated to use

So the game is abandoned or...

I don't know if it will help you, but if you keep your browser open without reloading the page, the game will continue to work without problems. Just avoid using the restart option since the game can't reload without internet so I would recommend making a save at the beginning of chapter 1 or the havard interlude

(Sorry if something sounds weird but English is not my first language) 

You're welcome, on the other hand ((after seeing the website) ToW isn't taking any real risks with the whole MasterCard thing, that's all more geared towards NSFW content so as long as you don't make any sexually explicit content (I don't know if you will do it at some point) you will be more or less safe, or at least that's what I understand, I don't know if the situation has changed in these weeks

If it helps, the vast majority of games of this type (text-based/if's) are made in programs like Twine

It's been more than 2 years without any news so I assume you dropped it, it's a shame, this really had potential.

WHY DID YOU CUT IT IN THE GOOD PART?!?, I should be mad at you but... The way you write is just too good and I know the wait will be worth it.

Anyway, in the meantime I will leave a representation of my character that will be waiting for the next chapter made in another game.(I made it as similar as possible)

I sometimes wonder why people think I'm weird, and then I remember I read this kind of stuff.

Now seriously, this is simply a work of art, the way you narrate and describe the story is simply beautiful, although I can't afford it, no matter how much I want to, I hope you receive a lot of support to continue with your amazing work.

Just by chance, did you base your story on Darkpetal's games? I'm just saying because part of the prologue resembles the beginning of their horrortale if. I'm not saying you copied them, but I found it curious.

I just want to know how I can get the web version to work on android, I'm not very familiar with this type of files yet