worse, a sequel / based off the original direction

Interesting protagonist; it's amusing how scatterbrained they are and leads to some equally interesting and amusing choices proposed to the player.
This font is a bit hard to read though, especially as someone who's dyslexic, maybe considered finding another similarly tech themed font 

I like the sound design whenever the killer shows, especially the first time, that knocking is certainly intimidating and sets the tone.  I also enjoyed Isabel's increasing sassiness towards Chad each time the loop repeats, real funny.
There's a sequence during the 6th loop (second time you meet Carol) where Isabel is speaking but Carol's speaker portrait is shown instead.
Is this the formal ending? If not, it'll be interesting to see where that goes. 

Thank you so much! Happy to hear it - the narrative designer ;)