Beautiful layout, great use of typography to set the vibe and tone. Fun scenario. I’d like to see more clues or hints to the topiary mask puzzle.

Excellent use of public domain art. Nice cover, good design overall. Seems like a fun module to run or play. 

Gorgeous layout, well organized and visually arresting. Fun concept and  lot of details. Strong work!

High stakes, classic dungeon tropes, the very best dragon. Lots to like here. Solid work. 

that’s my new “about the author” statement. Thanks for reading!

Engaging and challenging, with tons of potential for trouble. Nice clean layout, and I’m a sucker for a hand-drawn map. Terrifying monster, loads of treasure, potential total devastation, this adventure has everything. I’d love to see some pictures, but I understand the space restraints. Nice work!

top notch work! Clear goal without a prescribed method to achieve it. Lots of opportunities for creative players. Beautiful map, and smart move using it as the cover. Layout is clean and easy to read. 

perfect “appendix N” vibes. Great cover, classic map. Easy to find information, clear goals and intent. Nice work!

this is a fun one! Very creepy, solid “appendix N” vibes. Love the unmortality idea, especially how it might be applied to the PCs during the scenario. Nice work fitting everything into limited space and keeping it usable/readable. 

thanks for the good feedback. Much appreciated. 

Love the art and the fully-hand-drawn design. Easy to read, looks fun to play. 

Very thoughtful and useful feedback, thanks. Learning layout is definitely high on my list. Thanks for looking!

thanks for reading! We tried to present lots of implicit opportunities for shenanigans. 

So good! This whole thing is really impressive. Solid concept, stunning and utile art, very clear layout. Honestly the best I’ve seen so far. I’m aiming today’s D&D session to end where this one begins; I can’t wait to run it. 

Wow, great maps and layout! I’d love to see this in print. 

thanks for looking. I ran it solo a couple of times to “playtest”. 

I love the hooks, giving the players a framework to play within. Great use of space, easy to follow the thread. Classic party heist done very well. Lots of opportunities for player shenanigans. 

Wow, thanks! That means a lot coming from you. 

Rad cover. Love all the art throughout. Very “appendix N” theme and execution. Well done!

Clever puzzle dungeon. Clear goals but no prescriptive solution. Nice clean layout, very cool cover design. 

Thanks so much, we really appreciate you checking it out. 

This is great! Really clear layout, great appx N vibes. Honestly, pretty brutal for a low-level dungeon (possible no-save collapse tpk after 4 rounds!?) and I am here for it. Really dig the mutations table. Solid work!

great to have lots of options. Art and vibes are spot-on. Very clear layout. The cover absolutely slays. I like how modular it is, seems easy to slot in to an extant campaign. 

Top notch all around. Cool concept, extremely clear layout, and the art is outstanding. Great color choices. 

really fun whimsical art. Excellent layout work, very easy to find information. Cool idea to have the first page as a handout. 

good idea about using headers. I’m bummed about the background art, too. I need to work on using fewer words to make more room. Thanks for checking it out!

cool art, fun idea, very “appendix n”.  Loving the old-school vibes with the layout.

Thanks for checking it out!

Gotta love a donkey hunt. Nice job!

wow. What a fun game. I did my first solo playthrough today, then immediately started another with my 11-year old. We are hooked. We’ll finish up Fronts 2 and 3 after dinner tonight. His mech and kaiju were both ferocious…