Thank you!

This had such  beautiful visual language.  I loved the shadowy people and the use of red.

Thank you.  Your comment really makes me feel seen.

I loved this game.  It reminded me of the game that made me want to make visual novels.  Embarrassingly, It was so long ago I can't remember what it was called but there had an alien and a vampire and a dress up/gift giving mechanic.  Thank you for making this.

I ended up removing the first teaser image in the splash.  I wasn’t sure about it to begin with and your feedback gave me the extra boost to make the choice.  I worked so hard on that monster’s skin texture and what not.  But less is really more in this case.  Thank you!

Omigosh!  I haven't finished it yet but there are so many different mechanics!  I used to be a pretty good student and the test segment was horrifying!  It's crazy what you got done in a month.  

I'm in the underground  layer segment with the veggies and I haven't heard Pumpkin face or Jerry speak yet.  Do the spoken lines happen later?

Nice UI and the sound/voice wasn't bad.  I had a little bit of trouble keeping the characters straight since it was a black screen throughout.

Not a bad start!  A little more detail about what I did (or was done to me) to have such crippling anxiety and be trapped in that super weird bathroom would be helpful.  

Was it supposed to end at reading the letter?  I had a little trouble reading the font.  It is very small.

I LOVE all the mean bitches in this game!  I had a good cackle at the insults.

  I played for  3 endings and the sad one hurt my heart.

Hikaru is super cute!  I was struggling a bit with the screen size and couldn't figure out how to adjust. It was so big I had to scroll it to find all the dudes.  That could very much be a personal skill issue though.

Thank you!  Our first playthrough video!

Like I always say, "Never trust a straight man who calls you 'honey.'"

I got a bug where it crashed when I was given Igor's Pill.  It said 'Speaker W is not defined'.  

Other than that, no notes.  Had a blast, I giggled.  Good times.

Ah!  No!  I want to know how it ends!  I love games with puzzles and I don't think I've ever played a VN with a crossword puzzle before.  I really hope you find time to finish this one.  What's here is fun!

OMFG!  Stan Hyewt Hall (the exterior shot of the mansion)!  We went on 2 field trips there in grade school.  I knew that place was shady!  I enjoyed the way the manor is navigated.

Wow!  I can't believe you have so few ratings, that was such a cool story.  I love the song mechanic and how the story's a little disjointed like a dream. Probably the best protagonist with amnesia set up I've ever encountered.  Kudos who ever realized that you don't remember what you don't remember, the protagonists journey of discovering lost memories was so organic because of that detail.

Octavia Spencer was right!  Never trust a man.

Great concept!  I second that the cliffhanger is particularly cruel.

Still not sure why my friends turned into cockroaches, but admittedly my Spanish is terrible.  Still, highly enjoyed!  Mis hombres es cucarachas!

Holy crap!  I was so shocked when I got to the end and it said this was a solo project.  What an amazing amount of work to get done in a month.  It looks gorgeous and the animations were pretty slick.   I was a little bummed that you made this amazing world where the dead walk among the living and it's possible to transfer/sell memories  but the dialogue focused more on dating and teen drama.  We were so curious about the supernatural elements!  Please tell us more!

No biggie, but there were a few tiny errors of missing images in the browser version.  I caught "sona_eye_%s" and "Gray_nose".  Heather had one when she was in bed but the text was so tiny, I couldn't make it out and her doofy boy toy had one when they were arguing in the hallway but I couldn't make out that one either.

Anyway, amazing work especially for a beginner. I would have never guessed you just started learning Ren'py if you didn't tell us.  If you decide to expand it and need a hand, we'd love to help you out!  

Such a beautiful game!  I'm looking forward to the full release.

I ran into a bug.  I let the spider interaction time out and suddenly Caroline appeared and I was telling her she was mesmerizing and then I got the text about making my first decision and my Reach increased and then I was coming out of the ground and at the start of the game (I kept my stats). I played through from there and then the game ended at the spider scene with Caroline present (no choice given).  I tried letting it time out  again on another playthrough and the game ended on the spider scene (with Caroline) after the initial time out.