fantastic game, but unfinished.

thank you for the hard work

i FINALY received a mail telling me there is an update, and it's not here

300 messages, no updates

ENOUGH !! if you want attention, use some other medium !! i tried to explain this before, this is NOT the place for this! ! all we want is a new version, i am NOT interested in the process at all !, you have sent me over 100 emails for no result !, do you want email from me every time i write a couple of hundred lines of code ?

GIVE us a break, none of your colleagues/competition does this!! create another channel !, i didn't subscribe to this !!, there is ONE thing i am interested in, a NEW version of this story ! i don't want to know anyone else !! create a facebook page, patreon, anything but not this, PLEASE !! STOP IT !!! STOP SPAMMING !

good, then i just turn of notifications, and i will miss the only one i need, that there is an actual update of the game !, i'm following dozens of authors like you, you use this site as it's your facebook/instagram, again, i would split the social aspect from the crucial information we need to get the latest version. did you talk to "most" the imaginary statistic ? did "most" tell you they like to get news about 3D renders, and scripts ?

please stop teasing (ok that’s like asking a writer to stop writing) i don’t need all these updates, i just want well, updates !!! i would recommend that you leave all the details to people that like that, give us a choice, i really don’t need this much information 

do you mean, an option that allows us to opt out ? please !

while i appreciate your posts, and i understand how this is a way to have meaningful contact with your "audience" and i admire your work, first that pretty blond girl who reminds me of a my best friend, and now the only remaining girl i have not had a "relationship" with, the one with the extraordirary over exposed breast, from the side (yes i don't remember her name), is it possible to have TWO channels of notifications ? i really don't want to know when you have written thousands of lines of bad code (there is simply no reason to do that here), i am not interested in the number of renders, or how someone with some sick fantasy can jerk off by being ugly to imaginary people, is there a way to limit notifications to when a new version is available ? because, frankly, i have no time for this, if you want to have attention, use patreon, or twitter/x instagamophone or whatever, all i'm interested in is when i can jerk off think about those amazing girls, you are doing a fantastic job, such good writting, but you clearly don't realize that every message that tells us that there is NOT a new version is just a disappointment ! i would only send notifications for updates, and allow all the others to interact with you on a voluntarily basis, you are very good at making the novels (except the coding, clearly) but, no, the way you manage the amount of information we get is just wrong, and i have the upmost positive intentions saying this, and if there was a private way to tell you i would have used it

ahem, i didn't read all the text with Alex, so i was a bit surprised, is that really necessary ?

i think Olivia is there to keep the game interesting, it's a slow burn, i like her too, she is my favorite now, get the most recent version... (Lea and Jen used to be my favorite, but i know them well enough now :)

a few corrections to chapter 7

MC to Monika

"So, Have you starting dating again? Or even just looking?"

could be

"So, have you started dating again, or are you just looking?"

(Starting MUST be "Started" the rest is optional)

later...

Olivia says

"But i was young and stupid and enjoyed the attention so i kept "teased" him

should be "Teasing him"

maybe pass the whole text to chat gpt to ask for obvious errors ?

i bought season 1 yesterday, is this a separate game, that requires another 11 dollars ?

what wait,l i just bought this game, and i have to pay again for the new version ?

ok i get it now, 0.6 means day six :), i have not visited those paths, they are probably a bit against my nature :)

hello, i saved many paths (Eva Sub, love, Cassie Sub love, Dual love etc) but until now i did not find any new scenes after the swimming pool scene that finished version 0.6.3.a

why isn' the most recent version available here ? i thought i paid for this game, but i'm not on any other site, or is 6.3.a actually the most recent version ? i thought i saw a message about v0.6.5 being released.

wow, what a fantastic game, the way the relationship with Lea and Jen build up, amazing ! and i just played half the demo, great writing, probably the best i have seen

so sad that there are no updates, Una is the prettiest girl in ANY novel, and i have seen dozens

try other games, this one is pretty bad

34506     "Mark eases himself onto the couch, wincing in pain as he does. Megan gently examines the cuts and bruises on his face."

34993     li "Oh fuck, Mark! You feel so good!"

35129     "Mark, Megan, Lily, and Nina stand in the doorway of their once cozy and orderly home, their expressions shifting from relief to shock as they take in the chaos that surrounds them."

Mark, instead of [name]

great start dev !, good story, some of the best animations i have seen, some bugs, but nothing really bad

when showing the map, then clicking a spot on the map there is a display glitch, it looks like the map is masking the 3D view, and it doesnt get updated correctly (the area that was under the map)

little ui detail:

allow the escape button to be used in addition of home button on phone ?

the models, and facial expressions are very well done !

the "tasks" app crashes when clicked (early in game, just after the phone becomes available)

[code]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 110, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 110, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 119, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 153, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 171, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 172, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 293, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 293, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 294, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 294, in <module>

  File "game/config.rpy", line 687, in getVisibleTasks

TypeError: 'NoneType' object is not iterable

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "script.rpyc", line 284, in script call

  File "intro/intro.rpyc", line 12, in script call

  File "tl/en/intro/intro_prison.rpyc", line 1241, in script

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/ast.py", line 921, in execute

    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/exports.py", line 1373, in say

    who(what, *args, **kwargs)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/character.py", line 1266, in __call__

    self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/character.py", line 930, in do_display

    **display_args)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/character.py", line 666, in display_say

    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/ui.py", line 299, in interact

    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/core.py", line 3377, in interact

    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/core.py", line 3810, in interact_core

    root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all

    d.visit_all(callback, seen)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all

    d.visit_all(callback, seen)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all

    d.visit_all(callback, seen)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/core.py", line 582, in visit_all

    d.visit_all(callback, seen)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/screen.py", line 451, in visit_all

    callback(self)

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/core.py", line 3810, in <lambda>

    root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/screen.py", line 462, in per_interact

    self.update()

  File "/private/var/folders/_4/w8xg8m1x3l97gddd0_56xw_40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/58C66A25-DEA0-463A-8A67-874539FF61FE/d/WhiteEight_Episode_2_v0.1.2.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/display/screen.py", line 653, in update

    self.screen.function(**self.scope)

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 110, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 110, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 119, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 153, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 171, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 172, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 293, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 293, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 294, in execute

  File "game/screens/phone.rpy", line 294, in <module>

  File "game/config.rpy", line 687, in getVisibleTasks

TypeError: 'NoneType' object is not iterable

Darwin-23.1.0-x86_64-i386-64bit x86_64

Ren'Py 7.5.3.22090809

White Eight - Episode 2 0.1.2

Fri Jan  5 04:30:47 2024

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i just started playing, i love the intro with the discussion between the developer and Sarah, just one comment, "You" says "Two Sisters the holy trinity",  well no, a trinity involves 3 entities, TRI = Three, ok i'm being  a bit silly i know but that's just not accurate ;-)

you typed "actully", in an already cryptic message,i guess we don't have smillies here ? i thought u were making fun of me

i like that one :-) my point is that the author uses vagina when he means labia, pussy etc, it's just weird.

man just speak english ! anyway, in case you mean im wrong, well, i'm not, the vagina is not what this author thinks it is, and that word is the same in most languages