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Need update😢

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Soon!

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Why do I feel like the real Romance Routes are not them? Because if this theory is true, I wouldn't have it any other way, this is very novel and fresh concept to do hahahaha

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Bruhhh hahahahahaha

This was genuinely so painful to watch, I kept asking why this is so well made and yet............so upsetting and eye-roll to read


UNTIL the reveal hahahaha then I thought "OH THAT'S WHY IT'S SO UNBEARABLE šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚" Then everything clicked in place hahahahaha

This VN is the definition of "Curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back"


8/10 would definitely wait for the rest of the update

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Deveriam aproveitar o Renzo tambĆ©m 

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I just read the newest build, finally - and I must say it's incredible.

Although this build, (0.7) - definitely lead to more questions than answers - and all of it sure is a tough pill to swallow, I think this is an awesome story and I can't wait for future builds!

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I wanna cry, but that just tells me I'm into the story. Honestly, at this point want to see certain people suffer. I'm feeling vengeful after this update. I enjoy is my words seem confusing, it was good, strong emotions mean I was immersed in the story.

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Will this turn into one of those ā€œregretful husband desperately chasing his wifeā€ arcs? Ahhh, I really love those two dogs, even though they betrayed me.

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Even though it’s really hard for me to accept, the story itself is honestly amazing. Please don’t change your original outline and structure just because of some readers’ opinions. It’s really great — it has enough ups and downs and plot twists, and I love it so much.

But PLZ, please add a bit more of the protagonist actually taking the lead, whether he’s the bottom or the top, PLZ!

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This is so painful— the story is amazing, but it hurts too much! Thank goodness I left a romance behind in Berno, or I’d really end up all alone, sob sob…

Plz, give me an ending where I’m in control and ruling the world. I promise I’ll train these two bad dogs into good doggies. (When I was literally leading the two of them around on leashes in the bar, I was so excited.)

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What really makes this so painful for me is that the protagonist is written way too mediocre — so ordinary that there’s nothing outstanding about him at all, and he’s even overly kind… I can’t even see any chance of a good ending later on. It honestly hurts so much, especially for someone like me who gets immersed so easily. He clearly has such powerful abilities, but doesn’t know how to use them and has no say in anything. For all I know, that so-called divine artifact might even be tricking him… Please, give me a dark route where he turns evil and takes over the world, PLZ.
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Please forgive me for freaking out like a lunatic in the comments on your page, it’s just that I’m really, really in so much pain right now.

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How do i get these 2 scenes im missing?

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Same cant seem to get these 2

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Hi! It’s a bit hard to explain, but try to choose only one character for each choice. There are also two points where you need to make the right decisions, one is choosing the correct movie, which unlocks a romantic scene, and the other is picking a good outfit that attracts the character you’re interested in. 

Then new areas will unlock on the island that you’ll need to visit.

 If you want a more detailed guide, you can check Discord. Good luck!

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Man, I really hope Berno or Renzo doesn't have any ulterior motives with Finn or the Artifact. They're the only genuine character so far (also Ali I think but he's straight so there's that [maybe]) to be a potential love interest for Finn. I still do hope for the best for the twoā‚•ā‚’ā‚‘ dogs we met, I just hope Finn won't make the same stupid mistake again by falling to them once more.

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fantastic read! love the parts with the game/puzzle elements, i thought that was super unique. checked out your socials and im excited to see that you're working on an rpg type of game! will definitely be on the lookout for this project's completion and the next

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Love the game! Looking forward to more. 

Anyway to update the discord link? It says invalid or expired invite. 

I checked and the link works, but if you still have trouble, massage me on Discord: polar.cakee

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Je veux le lien discord

Click on discord icon in the page.

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Je veux la suite dĆØs que possible šŸ˜Ž

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My dear Finn, go see Berno, he's the best. Truthfully, ever since I started the game, I suspected those two were with Finn for something else. Falling in love with someone in a single day is literally impossible. Finn's sister has a good nose for these things, and what's more, in this crazy plot twist, they're cheating on him and secretly in love! Dear Finn, life isn't a fairy tale. Complete your mission and go back to a normal life. All that glitters is not gold. I hope you get your happy ending.

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So only Berno's the best boi

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I hoping wolfman Finn ran over comes back as a savior

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There's Mert's dad too, besides the pervy horniness of the old man, he at least seemed genuinally interested on Finn :V

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sigh finn deserve better LIKE BERNO

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Is there a guide out there for getting all the scenes unlocked in the gallery? Still missing some after a few tries . . .

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I did not have very high expectations of this game due to it's art style. but I'm very glad that the Rotties piqued my interest because the story this game tells is perfect.

I have never experienced such an intense emotional destress from a piece of fiction in a while and this one broke me. I needed three days just to feel somewhat normal again. I will admit that it's because I really invested myself in the story and felt like everything that was happening to Finn was happening to me, but even still the story is done very well.

Despite my strong and positive feelings, the Japan-inspired and Jiro section was a drag. It might just be personal preference [I do not like anime and weeaboos], but it felt like a very strong disconnect from the structure that was being upheld in the previous sections and the sections afterward.

Even with that, the ending I got was vicious. I'm not giving spoilers, but it fucked me up. I stared at the title screen for some time before I got up from my desk and laid down on my bed for a few hours.

I don't care what happens afterward; Rajiv is my new husband.

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While the artwork is not really my cup of tea, I honestly love all the things this game had to offer. The most things I found pleasing is the dynamic that it had, it was quite charming, quirky, and although it had a quite simplistic presentation; it was oddly complex as well. I also love the many interactivity that it had, from the mini games and puzzles, and presentation of choice and decisions is perfect... I really love what you do in here.

BUT... and this is a quiet BIG 'BUT'.... what is happening on the day of we visit Jiro!? What's up with that intense and really and I MEAN really intense and uncomfortable Conflict. It really left a really bad taste in my mouth, I don't like the whole conflict that you implemented in there, specially with how easily everything resolved at the end; considering the intensity of the conflict at hand. Also the way that the conflict seems to just disappear, and everything just turn fine, felt really... REALLY WRONG.



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to go in detail I don't like the whole play with Jiro (which is a kind of father figure to Mert) is blatantly Sexually as*aulting his supposed Son and his friends, and then to have the conflict to just settle with a simple sorry... Like I said before just felt really wrong. Because this topic isn't something to just be taken lightly.



Now, this one thing doesn't really make me hate the whole game, but I gotta say... I don't like how uncomfortable that part is. I think there's a better conflict to be played at here, a conflict that way more appropriate with the dynamic that you're trying to have. A topic that less intense, like maybe it's better to play the focus of the conflict with Jiro strictness, rather than his "Sexual urge". I get that you want to make a game with sensuality, but this isn't something to be taken lightly for a "Just Because"... I do love this game, and I want it to be succeed. So yeah, I'm sorry if I sounded harsh, but it's just something that needed to be addressed. I do wish the best for your project, and keep up the good work.

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Hi, thank you for your comment. There’s been a lot of discussion about this, and I totally understand if it gave you a bad feeling. In that part, I wanted it to feel a bit more like an anime, so I tried to use a trope that’s seen quite often. Maybe I went a bit overboard with it, and I’m really sorry about that. Don’t worry though, this kind of issue won’t come up again later.

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Oh, if that the case then I can see what you're trying to do... But if this was supposed to be comedic, I think the issue here happened because everything from the start of the game is pretty much always been straight up serious — I mean you even introduce a lot of interesting dynamic and interaction at the start, so the intention of being comedic in this part kinda got washed away. Not to mention that everything kinda went to far, that even if it was comedic since the start, the play is kinda got way too intense, it wouldn't be great if the wrong person got faced by this part...


Thank you for listening to me btw, I hope what I said didn't discouraged you or make you feel any unnecessary feeling... I wish you could get even more better in the future, and yeah — as always, keep up the good work.

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Bruh I feel bad for finn šŸ˜”šŸ„€

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I'm going with Rajiv all the way!















 - I hope this comment won't age like milk.

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After playing this version, because I have been telling the story from the perspective of finn, I will feel some frustration and feel sorry for finn when I know that neither of these two men is in love with finn. I also hope finn can attract these two men, at first because of the task, and then bring them a surprise... … Although that's not the case. I hope you can see two men who can like our finn later. If you see the author, I hope you can quietly hint whether our finn can still have a loving relationship with these two men

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Dios me quedé con ganas de ver lo que pasarÔ en el futuro es tan emocionante apoyaré al creador por esto la verdad esta novela me encantó

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If I could see the author update in October, I would be extremely happy. Of course, it can be foreseen that the eighth chapter won't be available until November or December. I still really want to see the upcoming updates. However, I do hope that the endings of the two characters won't be too tragic; otherwise, it would seem like a "backstabbing" act that's just for fun.

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I love this VN

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To be honest, the plot of this update really exceeded my expectations. Before this update, I had somewhat guessed that Mert and Artyom approached MC for certain purposes, and it was likely related to the Apple incident and other matters of the protagonist. But, my goodness, I never expected it to be so cruel. Mert and Artyom not only didn't like MC, but even hated him so much. Even though I didn't like them much from the beginning because of their overly enthusiastic and strange behavior, I felt sad for MC having to go through such a tragic experience. To be honest, I'm no longer interested in the story of Mert and Artyom. I'm more curious about MC's actions after learning the truth. And will we be able to choose some desired endings, such as refusing Mert and Artyom (if MC would forgive them), returning to the castle and living with the prince, and being with Rene or Renzo?But overall, I still really appreciate this work. I love the author's unique plot design and am looking forward to seeing the subsequent developments.

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Does the author know that things will turn around when they reach the extreme?You fall in love with each other before you fall in love with the main character, and then you still don't love or even hate the main character.I don't think you have enough ability to come back after what you have done.The author's painting style is good, but the plot is a mess, and he can't grasp the scale well.If the follow-up ability is not enough, it is basically a sure thing to become a dung.The main character has no personality charm at all, and she is extremely beautiful. I don't think people are like this.Experienced such a thing will not wake up, the rabbit will bite when it is anxious.If in the end the main character can't refuse to forgive them, or kill them, then your game is pure shit.Undoubtedly Dung WorkAs a protagonist, I believe he can get better no matter what, and those who cheat him and hurt him must pay the price they deserve.I'm here to see pure love, not to see the abuse of the Lord. At the beginning, you publicized that the two of them were official matches. The relationship did not include the protagonist, did it?So can you let them die together? This is not much different from the official match of pure love you advertised.The latest plot is amazing.I'd like to see how round you are.No matter how good my state of mind is, I have to curse people. Is there no normal plot in the animal tour? I can't eat something good and I have to suffer.Invincible.

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Hello, I honestly couldn’t really understand what you wrote, but I picked up on a few things. First of all, I never mentioned anywhere that this game is about ā€œpure loveā€, not in the tags, not in the description, nowhere. Especially since plenty of events happened in much earlier updates that were kind of hints that something was going to happen, especially the last update where one of the characters even gives a warning. So I really don’t get how someone could ignore all those signs. This wasn’t something that suddenly happened, the story has been gradually moving in this direction.

Second, the story isn’t over yet and nobody knows what’s actually going to happen. So far, all the guesses I’ve seen have been wrong and even careless... like people are creating weak stories in their own heads, attaching them to mine, and then assuming that’s how it’s going to be.

I just want you to wait a little longer and not judge too quickly. 

Have a good day.

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WOW Polar! I love this reply! It even turned me on

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Oh, I wrote this a month ago. It had a bit of an angry tone to it... I actually regret writing it like thatšŸ˜…

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hahahaha you're too kimd

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Your reply wasn’t  rude — he was insulting your work. If it were me, I’d be even angrier.
But honestly, I’m also really struggling with this direction, because right now I can’t see any hope of a good ending. It’s kind of unimaginable for me… I’m someone who gets very emotionally invested, and at this point I’m just drowning in pain…
I was even planning how to add the shark, Ronaway, and the polar bear into my harem, but in reality there isn’t a single person in my harem. That really hurts.
Still, I think he’s the one who was impolite — your tone was justified, because he was making insulting comments about your work. If he doesn’t like it, he could just walk away, but attacking your work like that is not okay. I believe you definitely have a complete internal logic and an unexpected ending planned (even though I’m still really suffering right now QAQ).
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Spoiler alert! Look away if you don’t want to get spoiled!











 

First off, I think the dev’s take on the plot is really good. Even before this update, the existing story already gave off vibes that this FVN wasn’t just gonna be a cheesy, wish-fulfillment romance where ā€œeveryone falls for me.ā€ And this new update? It totally took the FVN to a whole new level. Also, I wanted to ask the dev—how far along is the plot right now? I’d guess at least 50% done?

 

But let’s put the logical stuff aside and talk feelings—this is so cruel to Finn. Like, don’t get me wrong, I know the reason those two dogs fell for him (and how fast it happened) is totally absurd. But when the truth came out? The plot was just full of jabs and disdain toward Finn. After finishing one route, whenever I reload to unlock almost any other scene, I can’t even focus on the text anymore. ā€˜Cause everything feels like a lie… except maybe when he was with the Bernese Mountain Dog family? (We still don’t know if those dogs were 100% sincere with Finn, but I think they probably were.) So with that, I’ve gotta make a sincere request—if Finn gets to choose the life he wants at the end, please, please add an option for him to go back to those dogs.

 

Honestly, at this point, I can barely see a happy ending (HE) between Finn and these two dogs—the black one and the red one. I low-key hope those two end up together, and I’m also curious to see what kind of story the dev will tell to wrap up the plot all the way to the game’s end.

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Hello, thank you for your beautiful comment. So far, it’s 70% complete.

The story is already 70% complete?

Does that mean the characters' journeys are almost over?

How many updates will there be?

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Right now it’s update 7 and 70% is done, so you can guess how many updates are left (:

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Oh no! I feel like I've only just met these characters. And then I can only meet them three times before it's over.

As someone who gets way too emotionally invested, I strongly oppose any kind of romantic relationship between those two dogs!No!!!!!!!!

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Can I have a guide for this update? I can seem to get its first CGI.

You can always find the latest guide on Discord.

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This ending made my stomach ache and I was so angry that I couldn't sleep all night


But I still like it very much. I hope the game is getting better and better. I look forward to the next story.

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mild spoilers:













Okay, so im part way through on merts path, and like, is there a single trustworthy person we have met? cause like, everyone so far has been after our MC for one reason or another. 

You can definitely trust Rajiv.

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Please note that the following contains some plot revelations and negative remarks.😔













 I actually thought this was a Romantic imperial harem-themed FVN, but then you told me that Mert and Artyom's feelings for MC were all fake. They ended up confessed their love to each other on their own, and they never truly loved MC.?They even thought he was a useless child? Originally, they were already bad enough as killers (or mercenaries) who indiscriminately killed innocent people. If they really loved MC, it would be acceptable. But instead, they kicked MC away and fell in love with each other. This kind of mutual infidelity in a harem situation really hits my nerve the hardest. I really can't figure out how MC will eventually accept them (or they simply don't want to come back to MC's side?). I think MC should return to the princes in the castle, at least their feelings for MC are genuine and without any falseness.šŸ˜“

But I still really like this work. I sincerely hope you can continue to give it your best.ā¤ļø

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What. A. Game!!! I really love it! But my Goddess, how hard it would be for me to play after build 7!

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Me: OMG a new update!!! YEEEEES I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE HOW THE STORY CONTINUES!!!

- I was then sentenced the Judas Cradle, the Brazing Bull and the Devil Handshake all in one go…

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The 0.7 update was a big surprise. The supporting characters' actions and motivations are now explained. They no longer feel like characters, but like real, living people. The protagonist's fate is truly pitiful, and I feel sorry for him. I'm really looking forward to future developments. Keep up the good work! Thank you for your work! I hope every good person gets a happy ending.

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Ok, not only does this FVN have some of the best and hottest beefcakes and super lewd erotic NSFW scenes.  The plot is also really interesting! You can tell the Dev/Team really put tons of love and dedication in the making of this project!   :3

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