Finished the second chapter. I liked it better than the first.
I'm a sucker for the softer and domestic moments. Probably why I love Where the Heart Rests so much. I melted when Yuel passed out in the carriage.
Yep, I know you have a proofreader already. I was just offering. Didn't know constant was a synonym for faithful though, I've never heard it used that way before.
Anyway, the writing is always good on these stories. You already know I love their dynamic so any time I see a Tavi/Yuel game, I grab it (assuming I know it is one). You weren't kidding about this one being erotica lol. Certainly nothing wrong with that, and I liked seeing a game from Tavi's perspective. I'd love to see more like that, and it makes me wonder what's going through his head in previous games with them you've made.
Honestly the only thing that I wind up considering when I play these is whether I like the art or not.
So far, my favorite artist you use is the one who worked on Unluckily in Love (I especially like how dark Tavi's complexion is in that case and I LOVE his pouting face).
The art for this one is okay, but a few of the sprites just look kinda strange to me. Mostly when Tavi is smirking, his lips look a little odd, like half his mouth is sewn shut. The CGs aren't terrible though. I wish it wasn't so censored, but I know itch has been cracking down on such things (for some reason) so I don't hold it against anyone.
I'm playing the first one now, and will give full impressions when I'm finished, however I wanted to mention that there's a few words used in some contexts I'm unsure of. Like, they work but make me question if a better synonym could be used (Example: Eva using the word "constant" when the context makes me think "consistent" would work better). Could be a UK vs USA English difference, I suppose.
Also, there's this...
Just FYI, cause that's not Zeke lol.
.... And this:

May I offer to proofread future games? You don't have to pay me for it or anything, I just wanna make sure these games are the best they can be.
Theeeeen I'll leave my feedback here. ;3
Pretty sure I'd found this one, installed it, then forgot who it was about. I remember being like "Oh I love omegaverse, but both alphas...?" Then saw it was a Yuel/Tavi which made me immediately grab it, but then forgot who it was about cause I hadn't touched it. So after finishing the wholesome Where the Heart Rests, I installed it again and played it immediately.
Because I know how their relationship usually is and how Yuel is on a daily basis, I'm on the fence about the secondary gender choice. I don't hate it, and the VN is certainly cute (of course it is, it's my fave pair) but I kinda wish the roles were reversed. I kept expecting a certain omegan trait to throw Yuel for a loop while he was being a naughty little cousin in Tavi's bed ("I've always been an alpha, haven't I? Wtf is this and why is it happening NOW?"), and I just love seeing a confused/angsty Yuel anyway and Tavi being the only one who can assuage his worries.
Honestly, either way they'd be atypical for either secondary gender. Tavi is too clingy for an alpha and Yuel is too dour for an omega.
I did love seeing Yuel's grumpy face when Tavi clung to him when he visited at the end though. That was adorable.
Either way, I enjoyed it. Their dynamic always makes me smile.
If you do omegaverse in the future, maybe just leave comments off from the get-go since it sounds like that attracts spam for whatever reason. We can always find a way to give feedback, even if it's in a different VN or (like in this case) a comment on an announcement.
Finally got around to playing this, and loved it so much. I wanna complain about it being too short and wanting to see more, but it's so cute either way. I think you have another hit couple on your hands like Tavi and Yuel. Akira is so cute, and seeing him with tsundere Haru... It's perfectly adorable.
Finally got around to playing this. Gotta say, I'm hoping for an eventual sequel for it with a redemption arc for you-know-who. (Still waiting for a sequel to Nursery Diaries too ;3 )
I love this, especially the very Ace Attourney-esque parts.
Trying to avoid spoilers while getting what I wanna say across isn't easy lol.
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As soon as it was revealed that someone would betray him, I was like "It's gotta be the dude from his dream!" Then it turned out the accident wasn't an accident, and I had the same thought again. Regi obviously trusted him.
Ace Attourney is one of my favorite franchises, and I'm actually playing it now as a matter of fact. The trial part was great! I love figuring out mysteries in a detective/court setting. Kinda wish the romance was a little more involved, but I understand the game wasn't focused on that.
My headcanon until further notice is that the ending is a mix of the unforgettable and true endings. I'd love to see Arlin wind up on parole, his parole officer being his arresting officer (hint-hint), and his arresting officer being like, "as part of your parole, join Reginald!"
This update made me realize how much I love Paolo.
I'm hoping there's some route for Paolo in the future. He looked kinda jealous when Luke took me away after our early morning tryst.
I tend to have multiple saves, and I almost never remember which one is for who, so I had to start over for all but one of them. So, when meeting that gorgeous were-tiger for the first time, I chose "Here, kitty kitty" for the first time ever (I always choose 'impressive pet') and proceeded to laugh aloud about the dialogue that came after.
Cats, indeed, Alex. xD
Speaking of, after being bitten by Mayhew at the tower, shouldn't Alex wake at the tower the next morning? Last couple times that hasn't happened, he wakes in his apartment... I'm on Android btw.
The song Ethan sings when Justin stays over... Since they're not dating and haven't even discussed being gay, it feels awkward for him to sing about having love in his heart. I know there's different kinds, but that entire scene makes me feel second-hand embarrassment and awkwardness.
Otherwise, loving this so far. Theo's my fave. <3
"Six romancable characters..."
So, who isn't romanceable? Cause I have 7 save slots, one for each character and apparently one of them isn't truly a route. I'm guessing Brenden, but... Idk.
Anyway, love the game so far. It's deeper than a lot of these types of games, more story and less "fuck everyone in sight". I like that.
As someone who plays in English as well, the voice acting isn't great either. I turned it off, but it's the only thing that indicates who's speaking, sadly. It sounds like a lot of those AI voices being different people and the voiced lines are just as clunky as they're written. I let it slide cause it's obvious the dev doesn't have English as their first language.
Since X/Twitter is being a butt (No DMs unless we're mutual friends, same on TikTok) I'll just offer here.
There's some inconsistencies in the game, some grammar issues, and a handful of misspellings. Possibly some code issues as well since choosing one option will sometimes bring up dialogue as if the other option was chosen. If you need someone to look it over and correct anything, I'm willing to help. I can even do light coding and can probably fix those few choices for you. Plus I'm free.
Still reading through it, but I love those little references to the other games.
"Do you think you're a prince?"
"My father was rich enough to be an emperor."
Finished Ep 1; Yep, super adorbs. They're one of my favorite couples! I now have a new OTP... Well, not new I guess, I've loved these two since To Have and To Hold.