Sorry: I missed that the first counseling [secession] contained a multi-paragraph soliloquoy explanation of her guilty behavior contained in quotation marks. That's still not dialogue.

Honestly like the story, but the ending with April left me feeling gutted, with all the time they were spending together how did he not know, and why did she not say something..

Great story overall although the ending twist was a given. Only plot gap was she was still wearing her rings long after her husband passed and was wearing them at the BBQ. Dean would have noticed them then. 4.4*

More

Please

Come back Natalie, give us 8-20 more chapters of Adam's and his friend's exposures with family & their friends. Please 🙏

Co.e back, give us 8-20 more chapters of Adam's and his friend's exposures with family & their friends.

An interesting story. After the long tale you end it rather abruptly. You need to add one or 2 more chapters.

This may be the 5th story of yours that I've scanned through because I know I'm not missing anything of significance when I do.

I have to congratulate you on changing your perspective for the sake of variety.

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However, the basic plot is still the same, isn't it? The saintly husband...

More please

More please

One hopes they get together! They seem well suited for one another.

5

I'm writing more - but if you want it before I focus on a different story, people need to show this episode some love. 4* doesn't really cut it. It needs some 5s to push it into the 'HOT' zone.

Great story, sexy and exciting, I love it...

Is Chris Jackson? The name change seems to come out of nowhere. Or alternatively the story just follows this random guy Chris for a bit.

2*. Mainly because you wrote it more like it was a cuck story rather than a grieving wife. I get the reason why, but it was so obvious he was dead.

Anon: Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying the ride.🙂

A delightful story!

5

Very hot story that transcends the usual incest clichés — made possible with very erotic but articulate writing.

What the heck was the first sentence in this story, it had nothing to do at all with the story.

So Cad is enjoyed “snogging” with Aaron. When does Roger get to enjoy ‘snogging’ with some hot woman, younger than his old slut bitch of a wife? Eh? Wouldn’t it be great if Roger and his paramour was off stage but where his wife could see him lay a really hot “snog” on the young...

Writing brilliant, story so so. Still unfinished. It’s the old ethical conundrum, is doing something bad for a good reason, essentially bad. To Leah, no; to Aaron, yes. Part 3 please.

This is so sweet, I would love to read a whole book about these two, but where you left off here is lovely, too.

Margaret needs a gift

Perhaps a necktie?

Maybe from Columbia?

Would be a much better story if you didn't add in all the political bulls*it filler that actually detracts from the value of the story. By doing that, you have alienated half of your readers immediately by being divisive. If you must use political views, at least make it a key aspect...

Good description anon…of that wonderful moment when you feel that you’re helpless to stop from ejaculating… I mean after all, it’s just a clinical exam in a doctor’s office… so why would you be shooting cum all over the place..Hot that you kept the lube and enjoyed it all day and...

What chimp got access to a computer and used ChatGPT to write this moronic masterpiece?

Outstanding love to be used like this and kept for a week or more.

I love this FICTIONAL story. I love how the FICTIONAL MC and his FICTIONAL wife were acting. Ok, enough with trying to get across to some readers that 99% of the stories on Literotica are fictional.

The only real complaint I have would be the abrupt ending. To me, it's like a...

oh wow, cant wait for the next part, that's a 5 for me

I'm getting a little skeptical of where this story is going since there seems to be too much emphasis placed on anal and now golden showers. What's next, scat? Yech!

Good start, looking forward to more.

Reminds me of Woodknot Warrior.

Didn't deliver the spice yet.

Friends,remember this is fiction and fiction requires some element of the suspension of reality for it to work..this is a great yarn.

I'm struggling here. I like what's happening with Alex and Toni. So judge me for that. But the rest if the storyline, is horrible. Pastor Dan is repugnant, grooming Sam. ( yes adults can be groomed) and he'll eventually rape her. And Alex' s naivete....allowing boys and men to use...

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Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to comment, and give a rating. I really appreciate it! There will definitely be a part 4, and probably a part 5 and even a part 6, but it could be a while. I think I turned off the Highway of Life onto a bumpy...

So want to be seduced and aggressively fucked like that. Daddy mercilessly ravaging my cunt, turning it into a gaping hole. “gaping hole” Staring at those words and wanting it so much. And getting it because I was a slut and tempted daddy..innocently whimpering and wanting daddy to...